Lower commenter saying this felt like a headache is right- a migraine in particular. The layout of this is interesting. I didn’t know Twine could make ereaders like this. It’s very lovely…
Writers looking for answers via creation of art is something I always enjoy. The worldbuilding and description of “Perpetua” in fiction was really interesting. I like how the maid’s thought processes and how she came to create her work is developed.
really interestingly written. had to read through this twice to figure out what was going on. it also feels like i'm reading a headache /pos. there's a lot of world building here that happens in the background, which also integrates itself into its main 'plot' rather seamlessly. that said, rip to the protagonist, she's yearning for something that will never be.
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Lower commenter saying this felt like a headache is right- a migraine in particular. The layout of this is interesting. I didn’t know Twine could make ereaders like this. It’s very lovely…
Writers looking for answers via creation of art is something I always enjoy. The worldbuilding and description of “Perpetua” in fiction was really interesting. I like how the maid’s thought processes and how she came to create her work is developed.
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really interestingly written. had to read through this twice to figure out what was going on. it also feels like i'm reading a headache /pos. there's a lot of world building here that happens in the background, which also integrates itself into its main 'plot' rather seamlessly. that said, rip to the protagonist, she's yearning for something that will never be.